What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt asks about government responsibility, personal freedom, health cost, or fairness.
Task 2 question guide
Unhealthy-food tax prompts need how price changes consumption.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Common trap
Only saying tax makes people healthier without explaining low-income groups or alternatives.
Diagnostic evidence
Without affordability or substitution, the policy argument is incomplete.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
Write one policy chain: tax -> price signal -> purchase habit -> health result.
- Whether price mechanism is specific
- Whether fairness is handled
- Whether health result can be explained
FAQ
What problem does Unhealthy food tax solve?
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
What evidence should I check first for Unhealthy food tax?
Only saying tax makes people healthier without explaining low-income groups or alternatives.
What should I redo after reading Unhealthy food tax?
Without affordability or substitution, the policy argument is incomplete. Write one policy chain: tax -> price signal -> purchase habit -> health result.
Is Unhealthy food tax an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Food topic
IELTS Task 2 food topic 常在 fast food、local food、health 和 culture 之间跳。先诊断题目角度。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Health topic
IELTS Task 2 health topic 常见问题是把 lifestyle、tax、public health 混在一起。先诊断责任和证据。
Fast food health
快餐健康题要诊断个人责任、政府政策和消费习惯，不要只写 unhealthy。
Libraries and internet
Public libraries and internet 题要诊断 access、digital divide、community space 和 public spending。
Public transport investment
公共交通投资题不要只写 more buses。先诊断预算、服务质量和 commuter choice。
Public transport vs cars
Public transport vs private cars 题目容易写成两边优缺点清单。先诊断比较标准和最终立场。
Start diagnosis
Check the outline risk for this question first.
Submit your Task 2 essay or outline and get one main blocker plus one revision target.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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