What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt asks about government responsibility, personal freedom, health cost, or fairness.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Only saying tax makes people healthier without explaining low-income groups or alternatives.
Without affordability or substitution, the policy argument is incomplete.
First decide whether the prompt asks about government responsibility, personal freedom, health cost, or fairness.
Write one policy chain: tax -> price signal -> purchase habit -> health result.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit your Task 2 essay or outline and get one main blocker plus one revision target.