Common trap
Only writing different cultures are interesting does not explain how society benefits.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Only writing different cultures are interesting does not explain how society benefits.
Without workplace, school, or community setting, culture argument becomes abstract.
First decide whether the prompt asks about social cohesion, economic benefit, identity, or conflict.
Write one culture chain: group contact -> shared setting -> benefit or tension -> policy response.
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