What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt asks about lifestyle choice, social problem, family change, or city cost.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Only writing people are lonely ignores work, housing, and family-structure change.
Without young professionals, older people, or housing pressure, the argument is thin.
First decide whether the prompt asks about lifestyle choice, social problem, family change, or city cost.
Write one society chain: living choice -> daily support -> social effect -> response.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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