What to ask while reading the prompt
Ask: whose tradition, affected by what, and how the behaviour changes.
Task 2 question guide
Globalisation and tradition prompts first need changed cultural behaviour.
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Do outline diagnosis before writing the full essay.
Common trap
Writing that young people ignore tradition without explaining how global influence changes behaviour.
Diagnostic evidence
If the body paragraph only has tradition, identity, and modern life, argument has not started.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
Write one culture chain: global media -> young consumers -> festival habit -> cultural result.
- Whether cultural behaviour is specific
- Whether the globalisation factor is clear
- Whether the result returns to the prompt
FAQ
What problem does Globalisation local traditions solve?
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
What evidence should I check first for Globalisation local traditions?
Writing that young people ignore tradition without explaining how global influence changes behaviour.
What should I redo after reading Globalisation local traditions?
If the body paragraph only has tradition, identity, and modern life, argument has not started. Write one culture chain: global media -> young consumers -> festival habit -> cultural result.
Is Globalisation local traditions an AI essay checker?
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Globalisation topic
IELTS Task 2 globalisation topic 容易写成世界变小了。先诊断文化、经济和个人选择之间的影响链。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Culture topic
IELTS Task 2 culture topic 容易写成 tradition is important。先诊断文化变化、代际差异和具体例子。
Globalisation broad example
示范 IELTS Task 2 globalisation 作文为什么例子太泛，以及如何把文化影响写成可证明链条。
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