Pre-draft outline check
Write risk group, intervention, skill learned, and behaviour avoided first.
Task 2 question
For crime prevention through education, explain how education changes behaviour.
This question often says education helps young people. A stronger paragraph names the risk group, school intervention, and behaviour outcome.
Prevention essays fail when the solution lacks mechanism.
Common trap
Only writing moral lessons does not prove crime will decrease.
Diagnostic evidence
If there is no behaviour change between education and lower crime, development stays thin.
What to revise after checking
Rewrite the solution paragraph with one education action and state which decision it changes.
- Whether the risk group is clear
- Whether the education action is specific
- Whether behaviour change appears
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Crime topic
IELTS Task 2 crime topic 容易写成 punishment 清单。先诊断原因、责任主体和 solution 机制。solution 要有机制，不只是态度正确。
Education topic
IELTS Task 2 education topic 常见问题在于 reason、example 和 consequence 还要连成可评分的论证，观点往往是有的。
Problem solution
IELTS Task 2 problem solution 题常见风险是问题写一套，方案写另一套。高质量答案需要问题和方案一一对应。问题和方案要成对出现。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Fast food health
快餐健康题要诊断个人责任、政府政策和消费习惯，不要只写 unhealthy。检查重点：责任主体是否明确、健康后果是否具体、措施是否有机制。
Free university education
Free university education 题目容易只写公平。先诊断 taxpayer cost、access 和 long-term return 是否服务同一个立场。
Global brands local culture
全球品牌影响本地文化的 Task 2 题，要先诊断 brand、consumer choice 和 cultural habit 的替代链。
Start practising
Check the mechanism in a crime-prevention essay first.
Submit one crime-prevention essay and find the main blocker in solution, example, or causality.
References