Diagnostic evidence
If the introduction does not answer the prompt verb, the later structure can go wrong.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then revision; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Turning every prompt into agree/disagree misses discuss both views, problem-solution, or advantage balance demands.
Rewrite one topic into four question types and write only the thesis to see whether the answer requirement changes.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
If the introduction does not answer the prompt verb, the later structure can go wrong.
Circle command phrases such as do you agree, discuss both views, causes and solutions, and advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Turning every prompt into agree/disagree misses discuss both views, problem-solution, or advantage balance demands.
Rewrite one topic into four question types and write only the thesis to see whether the answer requirement changes. Circle command phrases such as do you agree, discuss both views, causes and solutions, and advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit a prompt and outline to see whether the structure answers the task.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.