Common risk
Listing different views without explaining when one is stronger makes analysis look thin.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Listing different views without explaining when one is stronger makes analysis look thin.
If your opinion appears suddenly only in the conclusion, the essay usually has not prepared the judgement.
Write one shared comparison criterion first, such as cost, fairness, effectiveness, or long-term impact.
Write one paragraph for each side, but both must use the same comparison criterion.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit your outline to see whether both views use the same comparison standard.