Common mistake
Fixing grammar alone can make sentences smoother while Task Response remains weak.
Use diagnosis, evidence, and the next revision step to answer where the essay loses marks. No official score claim and no finished ghostwritten essay.
Locate the main blocker before choosing a revision step.
Fixing grammar alone can make sentences smoother while Task Response remains weak.
If topic sentence, reason, example, and result do not point in the same direction, the body paragraph loses marks.
Submit the full prompt and full Task 2 essay, and mark the paragraph you distrust most.
Rewrite one argument chain before polishing language.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit one Task 1 or Task 2 response and get the main blocker, evidence sentence, and next revision target first.