Common risk
Listing two advantages and two disadvantages without comparing severity, scope, or long-term impact makes outweigh hard to answer.
- Whether outweigh is answered
- Whether pros and cons use the same scale
- Whether conclusion makes a trade-off
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then revision; repair one step before writing the next essay.
If the conclusion only repeats that both sides exist, the body has not built a trade-off judgement.
Choose one comparison scale first: number of people affected, long-term effect, cost, or fairness.
Compare one advantage and one disadvantage under the same scale.
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Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Listing two advantages and two disadvantages without comparing severity, scope, or long-term impact makes outweigh hard to answer.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
If the conclusion only repeats that both sides exist, the body has not built a trade-off judgement.
Choose one comparison scale first: number of people affected, long-term effect, cost, or fairness. Listing two advantages and two disadvantages without comparing severity, scope, or long-term impact makes outweigh hard to answer.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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