Common risk
Listing two advantages and two disadvantages without comparing severity, scope, or long-term impact makes outweigh hard to answer.
- Whether outweigh is answered
- Whether pros and cons use the same scale
- Whether conclusion makes a trade-off
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
If the conclusion only repeats that both sides exist, the body has not built a trade-off judgement.
Choose one comparison scale first: number of people affected, long-term effect, cost, or fairness.
Compare one advantage and one disadvantage under the same scale.
Listing two advantages and two disadvantages without comparing severity, scope, or long-term impact makes outweigh hard to answer.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit an outline to see whether it really answers advantages outweigh disadvantages.