Diagnostic evidence
Useful AI feedback names which scoring criterion is holding the essay back first.
Use diagnosis, evidence, and the next revision step to answer where the essay loses marks. No official score claim and no finished ghostwritten essay.
Locate the main blocker before choosing a revision step.
If a tool simply returns a polished answer, the learner does not know what to repair next time.
After feedback, revise one paragraph instead of copying a whole rewritten essay.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Useful AI feedback names which scoring criterion is holding the essay back first.
Submit the prompt and essay together; without the prompt, Task Response cannot be judged.
Use diagnosis, evidence, and the next revision step to answer where the essay loses marks. No official score claim and no finished ghostwritten essay.
If a tool simply returns a polished answer, the learner does not know what to repair next time.
After feedback, revise one paragraph instead of copying a whole rewritten essay. Submit the prompt and essay together; without the prompt, Task Response cannot be judged.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit one Task 1 or Task 2 response and get the main blocker, evidence sentence, and next revision target first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.