完整真实测评样例

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这是一篇真实 Task 2 作文经正式生产测评链路得到的完整结果:参考分数区间、四项评分、主卡分点、原文证据、目标修复段落和下一步修复动作,原样公开,不改写成营销稿。

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完整样例测评

作文来源:内部测试者 · 模型 qwen/qwen3.7-max · 提示词版本 examiner.v7.2026-07-08 · 生成于 2026-07-17
题目

Some people believe that technological advancements have made our lives simpler and more convenient, while others argue that these developments have led to a loss of important life skills. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

完整作文
268

With the development of science and technology, our life has changed a lot. Some people think technology makes our life more simple and convenient, but others believe people are losing many important life skills because of it. Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, technology brings more advantages than disadvantages. First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who is far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do it easily. However, some people point out that we are losing some skills. For example, many young people cannot cook, cannot read a paper map, and even cannot write Chinese characters correctly because they always type on the phone. My cousin is a good example, he cannot go anywhere without navigation. If one day the phone is no electricity, maybe we cannot do anything. What is more, technology also makes people lazy in thinking. When we meet a problem, we search the answer on the Internet directly instead of thinking by ourselves. Some students even use AI to write their homework, so their writing skill becomes worse and worse. In conclusion, technology indeed makes our life simple and convenient, but it also brings some problems. I think we should use technology in a proper way and do not depend on it too much.

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卡分诊断结果

6-7

Task 2 议论文 · 268
Task Response
7
Coherence & Cohesion
6
Lexical Resource
6
Grammar Range & Accuracy
6
最拖分的点
1. Body paragraph role is unclear
优先修

Start the target blocker body paragraph with one sentence that names its job.

Clear paragraph roles make the argument easier to follow without adding a full new essay.

2. Key wording is too general for the claim
优先修

Choose one precise academic collocation for the central claim and reuse it consistently.

Precise wording reduces examiner doubt about the logic of the argument.

3. Sentence control distracts from the argument
优先修

Fix the article/preposition pattern in one weak sentence before rewriting more content.

Language control should stop distracting the examiner from the idea you are trying to prove.

这个判断依据什么
本次目标段落

First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who is far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do it easily.

  • Start the target blocker body paragraph with one sentence that names its job.
  • Keep the paragraph focused on the same claim.
  • Use your own wording; do not copy a model answer.
下一步修复步骤

Start the target blocker body paragraph with one sentence that names its job.

作文来源

样例来自内部测试者,或来自明确授权并完成匿名处理的学习者。页面只使用去身份化的固定数据,不直接读取用户数据库记录。

生成方式

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