Common risk: changing topics without changing the blocker
Writing education today and technology tomorrow will not help much if body development remains thin.
New prompts can expose more scenarios, but if the same issue repeats in every essay, a new topic will not automatically change the blocker.
Diagnose first, then plan the rewrite.
Writing education today and technology tomorrow will not help much if body development remains thin.
If unclear position, underdeveloped, or mechanical linking keeps appearing, targeted revision is needed.
Do not collect twenty suggestions first. Find the one blocker that matters most for the next version.
Revise around one blocker, then use revision comparison to see whether that blocker actually improved.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit one essay and get one main blocker plus one revision target first.