What to confirm before writing
Before reading a model answer, write your own thesis, topic sentence, and one reason.
Chinese model-answer page
Model answers should be used to reverse-check your own diagnostic evidence.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then revision; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Common risk
Memorising model answers can improve surface language while causing off-task or unstable-position risk when the prompt changes.
Diagnostic evidence
If you only remember expressions but cannot name which sentence explains, compares, or concedes, learning has not become skill.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
Extract one step from the model answer, then rewrite it with your own prompt and position.
- Whether your own version comes first
- Whether only one step is extracted
- Whether whole-paragraph copying is avoided
FAQ
What problem does Chinese model answer solve?
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
What evidence should I check first for Chinese model answer?
Memorising model answers can improve surface language while causing off-task or unstable-position risk when the prompt changes.
What should I redo after reading Chinese model answer?
If you only remember expressions but cannot name which sentence explains, compares, or concedes, learning has not become skill. Extract one step from the model answer, then rewrite it with your own prompt and position.
Is Chinese model answer an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，而不是只改语法或替换高级词。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Model answer problem
IELTS writing model answer 搜索很容易变成背范文。本页说明如何把范文转成结构诊断和重写任务。
Sample answer diagnosis
IELTS writing sample answer diagnosis 把样答案例转成 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical 和 Grammar 的诊断证据与重写步骤。
Chinese sample essay problem
雅思大作文范文可以帮助理解结构，但照搬会掩盖自己的主卡分点。先用范文反查论证步骤。
IELTS Writing off-topic
雅思写作偏题常来自忽略命令词、话题范围或比较对象。先检查题目回应，再改语言。
One-on-one correction
雅思写作一对一批改适合处理反复出现的主卡分点，而不是每次只改一篇作文表面问题。
Online writing correction
雅思写作在线批改不应只给总评。有效结果要指出评分标准、原文证据和下一版重写目标。
Start diagnosis
Diagnose your essay before comparing model-answer gaps.
Submit your paragraph and find one scoring evidence point to repair first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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