What to confirm before writing
Before reading a model answer, write your own thesis, topic sentence, and one reason.
Chinese model-answer page
Model answers should be used to reverse-check your own diagnostic evidence.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Common risk
Memorising model answers can improve surface language while causing off-task or unstable-position risk when the prompt changes.
Diagnostic evidence
If you only remember expressions but cannot name which sentence explains, compares, or concedes, learning has not become skill.
What to revise after checking
Extract one step from the model answer, then rewrite it with your own prompt and position.
- Whether your own version comes first
- Whether only one step is extracted
- Whether whole-paragraph copying is avoided
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Model answer problem
IELTS writing model answer 搜索很容易变成背范文。本页说明如何把范文转成结构诊断和重写任务。从范文只提取一个步骤：让步、比较、例子机制或结论回应。
Sample answer diagnosis
IELTS writing sample answer diagnosis 把样答案例转成 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical 和 Grammar 的诊断证据与重写步骤。
Chinese sample essay problem
雅思大作文范文可以帮助理解结构，但照搬会掩盖自己的主卡分点。先用范文反查论证步骤。只背范文会让你以为素材够了，但自己的 topic sentence 和 example 仍然断开。
IELTS Writing off-topic
雅思写作偏题常来自忽略命令词、话题范围或比较对象。先检查题目回应，再改语言。先把问题拆成一个卡分点、一条诊断证据和一个下一版重写目标。问题越小，重写越容易真正聚焦。
One-on-one correction
雅思写作一对一批改适合处理反复出现的主卡分点，而不是每次只改一篇作文表面问题。先判断批改、修改、润色、评分器、老师批改、网课或卡分修复方案能不能给出可验证的诊断、证据和重写步骤。
Online writing correction
雅思写作在线批改不应只给总评。有效结果要指出评分标准、原文证据和下一版重写目标。只看总分和几句泛泛建议，会让你下一篇继续犯同类错误。只选一个主卡分点重写同一段，用修改前后对比验证。
Start practising
Diagnose your essay before comparing model-answer gaps.
Submit your paragraph and find one scoring evidence point to repair first.
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