Why templates fail
The logic and collocations in model essays are the author's natural expression after years of accumulation. Forcing them into an unfamiliar context screams "patchwriting" to the examiner.
Common Myths
Templates fail you in the exam? You need rewrites based on your own draft.
Reading Band 9 essays feels great, but in the exam, your brain defaults to the same broken logic and Chinglish you are used to.
It is time to correct the wrong habits you have held onto for a long time.
The Myth
Thinking that memorizing model essays perfectly will allow you to copy-paste them in the exam for a high score.
The Reality
Your brain only remembers the paths you have struggled with, thought through, and ultimately corrected yourself.
Rewrite from your own draft
Put away the model essays and templates. Face the flawed first draft you just finished, target the diagnosed problems, and rewrite using your own vocabulary and logic.
- Stop being a template copyist
- Build stable, correct writing habits
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
How to practise IELTS Writing
雅思写作练习不必同时追很多方法。从一篇真实作文开始，找出最该先改的一处，自己完成修改和完整修订稿，再用不同题目检查能否独立做到。检查重点：关联阅读：不知道怎么练？
Score gap diagnostic
雅思写作卡在 5.5/6/6.5 时，先用一篇真实作文找主卡分点、原文证据和下一步修改步骤。只看总分或四项标签，会让你下一篇仍然不知道先修哪一个动作。
Writing mock test
雅思写作模考不只是按时完成 Task 1 和 Task 2。应保留原始作文与题目，考后按 TA/TR、CC、LR、GRA 检查最影响目标分的主卡分点和原文证据。不要一次修改所有问题；先选一篇作文和一个关键段落，完成有目标的重写并对比前后变化，再决定下一次模考要继续验证的写作动作和修复结果是否足够稳定。
Chinese model answer
雅思写作范文用来分析任务回应、立场、段落功能、展开链和语言选择，而不是整篇背诵后套进新题。先看 thesis、topic sentence、reason、example 与 conclusion 如何共同回答命令词，再用结构证据反查自己的提纲和作文。定位最薄弱的步骤后，完成有目标的段落重写，保留自己的观点与表达。
IELTS Writing off-topic
雅思写作偏题常来自忽略命令词、话题范围或比较对象。先检查题目回应，再改语言。先把问题拆成一个卡分点、一条诊断证据和一个下一版重写目标。问题越小，重写越容易真正聚焦。
Start practising
Start from your real baseline and find the breakthrough point.
Submit a real first draft, see clearly where your vocabulary and logic gaps lie, and replace ambiguous self-perception with real evidence.
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