Do not throw isolated claims
Examiners want to see "Why is this true?" and "How does it answer the prompt?"
Throwing out a new idea right after stating one, or just repeating the topic sentence with empty words, resulting in thin development.
Changing the underlying logic is more important than simply memorizing vocabulary.
Examiners want to see "Why is this true?" and "How does it answer the prompt?"
Develop along the chain: State the claim -> explain the reason (why this happens) -> give a specific scenario example -> summarize and tie back to the prompt's position.
When you thoroughly explain the cause-and-effect chain, interlocking every link, your paragraph will naturally reach 80-120 words without any filler.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Start a new writing cycle now, structure the argument chain according to the new method and complete the rewrite to see if you can break through previous bottlenecks.