What is side-by-side review?
It is a rigorous comparison between the original draft and the rewrite. You must place the old and new sentences side by side to verify one thing: has the blocker been removed this time?
Writing Methodology
Not sure if your rewrite is better? Use side-by-side comparison to check.
Many people rewrite just by swapping in advanced vocabulary or making sentences longer, while the underlying logical gaps (TR and CC problems) remain untouched.
Changing the underlying logic is more important than simply memorizing vocabulary.
Evaluating your rewrite move
Evaluate it: is the problem fully resolved, partially improved, or still present? If not improved, your rewrite direction needs adjustment.
- Reject ineffective surface-level edits
- Use "is the problem solved" as the sole standard
The power of closed-loop training
Only when you see your real progress trajectory can you confidently execute the same writing moves in the exam.
FAQ
What is side-by-side review?
It is a rigorous comparison between the original draft and the rewrite. You must place the old and new sentences side by side to verify one thing: has the blocker been removed this time?
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
How to practise IELTS Writing
雅思写作练习不必同时追很多方法。从一篇真实作文开始，找出最该先改的一处，自己完成修改和完整修订稿，再用不同题目检查能否独立做到。检查重点：关联阅读：不知道怎么练？
After correction revision
雅思作文批改后不要只收藏报告。先选一个主卡分点，做短修复、目标段落重写和对比复盘。报告直接锁定最相关的原文段落和一个公开修复目标，下一步只有一次聚焦重写。
Develop Support
雅思写作主体段没话说？与其东拼西凑凑字数，不如学会建立“观点 -> 解释 -> 例子 -> 扣题”的完整论证链条。检查重点：观点贵精不贵多、每一个 why 都要有下落。
Writing diagnostic test
雅思写作诊断测试的目标不是只给一个总分，而是把完整题目与真实作文映射到 TA/TR、CC、LR、GRA，找出最影响下一版的卡分点和对应原文证据。完成诊断后，不要逐句盲改；先把优先问题收窄成一个短修复步骤或一段重写，比较修改前后是否出现可见变化，再决定下一篇要继续验证什么，以及这次修复是否值得保留、可迁移。
Diagnose First
雅思写作备考最怕盲目写新题。突破瓶颈的第一步是用一篇真实作文做深度卡分诊断，明确你是立场问题、逻辑断裂还是词汇语法问题。以为写得多就能提高，结果考了三次还是同一个分数。
Start practising
Apply this methodology to your next essay.
Start a new writing cycle now, structure the argument chain according to the new method and complete the rewrite to see if you can break through previous bottlenecks.
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