Banfen Writing
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Score-gap diagnostic

Don't know why you lost marks? Return to the essay text for specific evidence.

Many candidates self-diagnose as "my vocabulary is not advanced enough," when in reality it might be "the third sentence in your second paragraph utterly fails to support the prompt."

This diagnostic is not an official score prediction, but a process to find the core vulnerability blocking your score improvement.

The trap of subjective guessing

Kept memorizing words but scores didn't improve because the wrong symptom was treated.

Solid essay sentence evidence

Every "problem" must map to a specific sentence or sentences you wrote—meaning there must be "essay evidence."

Draft vs Feedback comparison

Prepare your original draft and a correction report that features specific quotes.

Map to band descriptors

Compare the standard descriptors (e.g., Task Response band 6 vs 7) to see exactly which level your sentence is stuck at.

  • Demand that all evaluations include quotes from your original sentences
  • Targeting the actual symptom produces real behavioral change
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
How to practise IELTS Writing
雅思写作练习不必同时追很多方法。从一篇真实作文开始,找出最该先改的一处,自己完成修改和完整修订稿,再用不同题目检查能否独立做到。检查重点:关联阅读:不知道怎么练?
Revision comparison
雅思作文重写完就结束了吗?核心步骤是对比复盘,客观验证你的重写是否真的修复了原有的卡分点。检查重点:拒绝无效的字面修改、以“问题是否解决”为唯一标准。
Develop Support
雅思写作主体段没话说?与其东拼西凑凑字数,不如学会建立“观点 -> 解释 -> 例子 -> 扣题”的完整论证链条。检查重点:观点贵精不贵多、每一个 why 都要有下落。
Writing diagnostic test
雅思写作诊断测试的目标不是只给一个总分,而是把完整题目与真实作文映射到 TA/TR、CC、LR、GRA,找出最影响下一版的卡分点和对应原文证据。完成诊断后,不要逐句盲改;先把优先问题收窄成一个短修复步骤或一段重写,比较修改前后是否出现可见变化,再决定下一篇要继续验证什么,以及这次修复是否值得保留、可迁移。
Start practising

Test your main blocker with a real first draft.

Submit a full essay to lock in your conservative range and core deduction point, then enter targeted rewrite repair.