Draft vs Feedback comparison
Prepare your original draft and a correction report that features specific quotes.
Score-gap diagnostic
Don't know why you lost marks? Return to the essay text for specific evidence.
Many candidates self-diagnose as "my vocabulary is not advanced enough," when in reality it might be "the third sentence in your second paragraph utterly fails to support the prompt."
This diagnostic is not an official score prediction, but a process to find the core vulnerability blocking your score improvement.
The trap of subjective guessing
Kept memorizing words but scores didn't improve because the wrong symptom was treated.
Solid essay sentence evidence
Every "problem" must map to a specific sentence or sentences you wrote—meaning there must be "essay evidence."
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Map to band descriptors
Compare the standard descriptors (e.g., Task Response band 6 vs 7) to see exactly which level your sentence is stuck at.
- Demand that all evaluations include quotes from your original sentences
- Targeting the actual symptom produces real behavioral change
FAQ
What problem does Find Essay Evidence solve?
Many candidates self-diagnose as "my vocabulary is not advanced enough," when in reality it might be "the third sentence in your second paragraph utterly fails to support the prompt."
What evidence should I check first for Find Essay Evidence?
Kept memorizing words but scores didn't improve because the wrong symptom was treated.
What should I redo after reading Find Essay Evidence?
Every "problem" must map to a specific sentence or sentences you wrote—meaning there must be "essay evidence." Compare the standard descriptors (e.g., Task Response band 6 vs 7) to see exactly which level your sentence is stuck at.
Is Find Essay Evidence an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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雅思写作批改看懂了，下一篇还是不会改？提交一篇真实 IELTS Task 2，先看保守参考分数区间、主卡分点和原文证据；由你自己重写一段、完成整篇第二稿，再对比修改前后变化。首次合格诊断免费；确认确有主卡分点后，可一次性选择 7 天 ¥29 或 31 天 ¥99 写作修复期，一次只进行 1 轮且不自动续费。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
How to practise IELTS Writing
雅思写作练习不必同时追很多方法。从一篇真实作文开始，找出最该先改的一处，自己完成修改和完整修订稿，再用不同题目检查能否独立做到。
Scoring blind test
雅思写作 AI 评分准不准？用考官盲测数据说话。本页详细说明如何使用 IELTS 官方考官已评分的 Task 1 与 Task 2 样本进行严格盲测：系统评分时对官方成绩完全双盲，逐篇计算绝对偏差、≤0.5 分差占比与误差分布，所有流程与数据公开透明，为你提供严谨、可信且具有高度参考价值的写作诊断基准。
before-and-after review
雅思作文重写完就结束了吗？核心步骤是对比复盘，客观验证你的重写是否真的修复了原有的卡分点。
Develop Support
雅思写作主体段没话说？与其东拼西凑凑字数，不如学会建立“观点 -> 解释 -> 例子 -> 扣题”的完整论证链条。
Writing diagnostic test
雅思写作诊断测试的目标不是只给一个总分，而是把完整题目与真实作文映射到 TA/TR、CC、LR、GRA，找出最影响下一版的卡分点和对应原文证据。完成诊断后，不要逐句盲改；先把优先问题收窄成一个短修复步骤或一段重写，比较修改前后是否出现可见变化，再决定下一篇要继续验证什么，以及这次修复是否值得保留、可迁移。
Start diagnosis
Test your main blocker with a real first draft.
Submit a full essay to lock in your conservative range and core deduction point, then enter targeted rewrite repair.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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