Task 2 · Scope of claims

Overclaiming: write only as far as your reasons reach

"Do everyone and always lose marks?" The words do not. A claim bigger than its reasons does.

The button opens the Fogport level map at "Do you mean everyone". It is a member level; levels open in order and four levels are free after sign-in.

Test one of your own claims

"Do you mean everyone" is a member level. Four levels are free after sign-in.

See this level on the Fogport map

Why you get stuck

The usual causes:

  • Writing everyone when the example covers only some.
  • Hedging every line with may until there is no position.
  • Dropping the claim at the first counterexample.

Fixes you can use now

Each comes with an example. Revise your draft against them.

  • Name who. Example: Most school leavers who want professional jobs benefit from university.
  • Add a condition. Example: If the school provides a quiet room, a longer break helps.
  • State the exception. Example: …, except for students who commute long distances.
  • If the reason is strong, keep the strong claim and say why.
  • Check: who ____; condition ____; exception ____; what I meant ____.

What this Fogport level makes you do

"Do you mean everyone", 7–10 minutes. Pick 2–4 of your own sentences. The Council gives a counterexample; decide whether it falls inside your claim, then narrow, add a condition, or keep the sentence and rebuild the reason.

Quick exercise

Which revision is safest?

Original: Everyone should go to university.

  1. A. Some people may perhaps go to university.
  2. B. Most school leavers aiming for professional jobs benefit from university.
  3. C. Everyone must go to university.
Show answer

B. A hedges away the position; C claims even more. B names who and can be supported.

FAQ
What problem does Overclaiming solve?

"Do everyone and always lose marks?" The words do not. A claim bigger than its reasons does.

Is Overclaiming an AI essay checker?

Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.

Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
进入雾港写作通关,选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Examples that do not support
举了例子,考官还是觉得论证弱?常见原因是例子太小、观点太大。这里有四个改法:说明机制、缩小观点、补一句回扣、删掉无关例子。常见的原因有这几种:。
Stable Position
雅思写作 Task 2 评分的核心是 Task Response。想拿到 6.5 及以上,必须在炫技之前确保整篇文章立场绝对稳定。坚持了很久的错误习惯,是时候被纠正了。
Task 2 paragraph order
两个理由都不错,先写哪个?段落顺序乱,常常是因为每段要做什么没想清楚。给每段定一个任务,再写一句承接,顺序就清楚了。附一道排序小题。常见的原因有这几种:。
Chinese position drift
雅思大作文立场漂移常发生在 discuss both views、agree disagree 和金钱幸福题。先诊断标准是否稳定。先看原文证据,再决定下一步改什么。
Problem solution sample
雅思问题解决类范文不要只背模板。先把 problem、cause、solution 一一配对,检查方案有没有执行者、动作和结果;再回到自己的原稿,只重写断开的那一组原因—方案。
Start practising

Set the scope of your claim in the Council.

See what "Do you mean everyone" asks on the level map. It is a member level and levels open in order; four levels are free after sign-in.