Diagnostic evidence
Without clear selection, Task Achievement suffers before grammar does.
Task 1 chart judgement
Table chart samples solve data selection first.
Turn the chart type into an overview, data selection, comparisons, and sentence control first. The goal is not memorising one sample; it is knowing what this chart needs most.
Decide which relationship the chart requires first, then choose the figures and language that support the overview.
Common mistake
Paraphrasing every cell turns the report into inefficient data copying.
How to revise the next version
Choose only six figures from the table and write two comparison groups.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to confirm before writing
Mark the highest and lowest in each row/column, then find shared patterns across rows or columns.
- Whether data is selected
- Whether row/column patterns are summarised
- Whether figures support comparison
FAQ
What problem does Table chart sample solve?
Turn the chart type into an overview, data selection, comparisons, and sentence control first. The goal is not memorising one sample; it is knowing what this chart needs most.
What evidence should I check first for Table chart sample?
Paraphrasing every cell turns the report into inefficient data copying.
What should I redo after reading Table chart sample?
Choose only six figures from the table and write two comparison groups. Mark the highest and lowest in each row/column, then find shared patterns across rows or columns.
Is Table chart sample an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Chinese Task 1 overview
雅思小作文 overview 要概括主要趋势、最大差异和异常点，避免写成数据列表。
Chinese Task 1 template
雅思小作文模板只能帮你表达，不能替你选择 overview、关键数据和比较关系。
Task 1 overview template
雅思小作文 Overview 模板只能帮助组织表达，不能替代对图表整体特征的判断。先找最高与最低、主要趋势、最大差异、交叉点或异常值，再选择能承载这些信息的句型。写完后删除不来自图表的空话，并检查总览是否覆盖全图、避免堆具体数字、能统领后续分组；最后用另一张图重写一次，验证方法可以迁移而不是只会套句。
Task 1 comparison sentences
雅思小作文比较句要把数据按相似、差异、极值、排名或变化幅度成组表达，而不是逐个数字写成清单。先确定比较对象与尺度，再选择 while、whereas、compared with 或倍数结构，并核对数字关系。结合 overview 检查每组比较为何重要，把两个孤立数据句合并成有信息量的句子，再用新图表验证分组方法。
Task 1 table chart
IELTS Task 1 table chart 数据较多，写作前应先找最高值、最低值、相似组、显著差距和异常点，而不是逐格抄写数字。用这些特征形成 overview，再按共同类别或比较关系安排主体段，并选择有限数据支持判断。写完检查总览是否覆盖全表、分组和比较是否清楚，把最薄弱的一组数据改成可验证的重写目标。
Task 1 data selection
IELTS Academic Task 1 数据选择决定报告是否真正回应图表。学习如何从折线图、柱状图、表格或饼图中识别主趋势、极值、交叉点和关键分组，先写有信息量的 overview，再用有限数据支持比较。结合常见漏选与逐点复述案例，检查自己的报告最该重写总览句、数据句还是段落分组，并验证是否改善。
Task 1 overview examples
IELTS Task 1 overview examples 的用途不是背固定句型，而是学习怎样从折线图、柱状图、表格、饼图或地图中筛选主趋势、极值、交叉点与整体变化。对比有信息量和空泛的总览句，检查自己的 overview 是否概括真正重要的关系，再决定下一版先重写趋势选择、比较结构还是数据支持，避免逐点复述图表。
Trend description
雅思小作文趋势描述要区分上升、下降、波动、持平和峰值，并控制 from-to 句型。
How to write bar chart
雅思小作文柱状图要先分组、找最高最低和明显差异，再安排主体段。
Start diagnosis
Turn the chart type into scoreable report actions first.
After submitting a Task 1 report, inspect the overview, key data, comparisons, and sentence accuracy first, then decide whether to rewrite the overview, data sentences, or linking.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References