Draft risk
More public transport must explain how service improvement changes commuter choice.
- Whether service improvement is specific
- Whether commuters change choice
- Whether congestion result can be explained
Common writing problem
When a transport solution has no mechanism, the policy sounds right but cannot prove the result.
This is not a Band 9 model essay. First, see why this Task 2 draft type gets stuck and which writing step the next version should repair.
This illustrates a common writing problem for study; official IELTS scores come only from the test.
Diagnostic evidence
The revision target is service quality, user decision, and congestion result.
Find where the chain breaks first
Check whether the topic sentence, reason, example, and consequence serve the same answer.
Repair one step in the rewrite
Repair one paragraph first. Turn the thinnest sentence into a provable cause-effect or comparison chain.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Transport topic
IELTS Task 2 transport topic 容易只写 more buses。先诊断公共交通、私家车、拥堵和政策结果链。先诊断题目角度，再决定例子。
Idea development
有 idea 不一定有结果：Task 2 主体段要把观点写成解释、例子和结果。按 claim→reason→example 查断点，再把最空的一句改成可评分论证。
Public transport investment
公共交通投资题不要只写 more buses。先诊断预算、服务质量和 commuter choice。先问：钱花在速度、覆盖、票价还是安全？不同目标对应不同结果。
Urbanisation vague problem
示范 urbanisation essay 把城市问题写成清单时，如何缩小到住房或公共服务压力。检查重点：问题是否缩小、受影响群体是否明确、后果是否有因果链。
Children advertising unclear cause
儿童广告作文常说广告有害但没有解释说服机制。先诊断年龄、产品和购买压力。这类草稿看似有观点，却缺少诊断证据。先诊断写作步骤，不要先找可背范文。
AI jobs absolute example
AI 就业作文常把技术影响写成绝对替代。先诊断职业群体、技能变化和再培训机制。这类草稿看似有观点，却缺少诊断证据。先诊断写作步骤，不要先找可背范文。
Start practising
Diagnose whether your draft has this blocker too.
Submit one Task 2 essay and let diagnosis locate one main blocker first.
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