Draft risk
Science improves life sounds like generic praise without beneficiaries and timeline.
Common writing problem
When science funding has no public benefit, the case for public spending is weak.
This Task 2 draft type may seem to have ideas while still lacking clear diagnostic evidence. Diagnose the writing step first instead of looking for a model essay to memorise.
This illustrates a common writing problem for study; official IELTS scores come only from the test.
Revision target
The revision target is public money -> research gap -> citizen benefit.
Find where the chain breaks first
Check whether topic sentence, reason, example, and consequence serve the same answer.
Repair one step in the rewrite
Repair one paragraph first. Turn the sentence that most affects meaning into a provable cause-effect, comparison, or trade-off chain.
- Whether public beneficiary is clear
- Whether market gap appears
- Whether benefit timeline is reasonable
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Government topic
IELTS Task 2 government topic 容易写成 government should do more。先诊断政策目标、预算取舍和结果链。
Idea development
有 idea 不一定有结果：Task 2 主体段要把观点写成解释、例子和结果。按 claim→reason→example 查断点，再把最空的一句改成可评分论证。
Scientific research funding
科研政府资助题要诊断 public benefit、private profit 和 long-term uncertainty。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Screen time vague example
示范 screen time essay 如何把 phones are bad 改成可证明的学习或健康风险。检查重点：内容类型是否明确、行为变化是否具体、后果是否扣题。
Sports weak example
示范 sports essay 为什么健康例子不能自动证明教育或公共资金观点。这不是 Band 9 范文。先看一类 Task 2 草稿为什么卡住，以及下一版应该先修哪一个写作步骤。
Technology unclear position
一个 technology essay 常见写作问题：当文章一边支持效率、一边担心失业时，先找立场和段落职责问题。Clear position 时好时坏：每段都像在回答不同问题。
Start practising
Diagnose whether your draft has this blocker too.
Submit one Task 2 essay and let diagnosis locate one main blocker first.
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