Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then revision; repair one step before writing the next essay.
If you cannot identify which sentence performs comparison or explanation, learning effect is usually weak.
Choose one criterion first and inspect only the sentences that support it.
Rewrite one same-type sentence in your essay instead of copying the sample answer.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Only reading expressions in a high-band sample misses that its strength is task response, development, and coherence control.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
If you cannot identify which sentence performs comparison or explanation, learning effect is usually weak.
Choose one criterion first and inspect only the sentences that support it. Only reading expressions in a high-band sample misses that its strength is task response, development, and coherence control.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit your paragraph and get one diagnostic target that can be compared with a sample answer.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
