Banfen Writing
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Writing problem examples

A sample answer should be used to reverse-check diagnostic evidence.

Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.

Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.

Diagnostic evidence

If you cannot identify which sentence performs comparison or explanation, learning effect is usually weak.

What to confirm before writing

Choose one criterion first and inspect only the sentences that support it.

What to revise after checking

Rewrite one same-type sentence in your essay instead of copying the sample answer.

Common risk

Only reading expressions in a high-band sample misses that its strength is task response, development, and coherence control.

  • Whether sample-answer functions are labelled
  • Whether your own sentence is rewritten
  • Whether a next revision target is created
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Model answer problem
IELTS writing model answer 搜索很容易变成背范文。本页说明如何把范文转成结构诊断和重写任务。从范文只提取一个步骤：让步、比较、例子机制或结论回应。
Opinion essay unbalanced
Opinion essay unbalanced 示例诊断立场漂移、反方处理过重和 conclusion 无法收束的问题。带着自己的原文逐项检查，再用一次有目标的重写验证判断。
Chinese model answer
雅思写作范文用来分析任务回应、立场、段落功能、展开链和语言选择，而不是整篇背诵后套进新题。先看 thesis、topic sentence、reason、example 与 conclusion 如何共同回答命令词，再用结构证据反查自己的提纲和作文。定位最薄弱的步骤后，完成有目标的段落重写，保留自己的观点与表达。
Writing score predictor
IELTS writing score predictor 只能作为诊断入口。更关键的是找到分数背后的证据、主卡分点和重写目标。单独的分数数字不能告诉你为什么卡在 6 或 6.5。
Stuck at 6
IELTS Writing 停在 6 分时，问题往往在于任务回应、段落展开、衔接或语言准确性中有一个主卡分点反复出现，练得少只是表象。文章看似完整，但题目要求只回应了一部分。
Task 1 correction
IELTS Writing Task 1 correction 应先判断 overview、关键数据选择和比较关系，而不是堆复杂句。提交图表题、报告和你认为最重要的两组数据。
Start practising

Turn a sample answer into one revision step first.

Submit your paragraph and get one diagnostic target that can be compared with a sample answer.

Try one question free
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