Diagnostic evidence
Without low-income users, children, or elderly people, public-service reasoning becomes empty.
Task 2 question guide
Public-library prompts need information access and public space separated.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Common risk
Only writing the internet has more information ignores fairness, study environment, and community function.
What to revise after checking
Write one service chain: public facility -> user group -> access problem -> social benefit.
What to confirm before writing
First decide whether the prompt asks about replacing libraries, funding priority, or digital access.
- Whether public-service users are clear
- Whether internet advantages are specific
- Whether spending judgement has a criterion
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Education topic
IELTS Task 2 education topic 常见问题在于 reason、example 和 consequence 还要连成可评分的论证，观点往往是有的。
Government topic
IELTS Task 2 government topic 容易写成 government should do more。先诊断政策目标、预算取舍和结果链。
Discussion essay
IELTS Task 2 discussion essay 要先拆 both views、your opinion 和比较标准，避免只写一边。
Public transport investment
公共交通投资题不要只写 more buses。先诊断预算、服务质量和 commuter choice。先问：钱花在速度、覆盖、票价还是安全？不同目标对应不同结果。
Public transport vs cars
Public transport vs private cars 题目容易写成两边优缺点清单。先诊断比较标准和最终立场。一段写公交好，一段写私家车好，却缺少判断哪个更好的标准。
Recycling laws
Recycling laws 题要诊断 individual behaviour、government regulation、enforcement 和 habit formation。
Start practising
Check whether the library essay only writes technology replacement.
Submit an outline and see whether public service and internet advantage are separated.
References