What to confirm before writing
First decide whether the prompt asks about moral education, discipline, independence, or civic responsibility.
Task 2 question guide
Responsibility-education prompts need family influence and school roles separated.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Common risk
Only writing parents know children best ignores school rules, peer context, and socialisation.
Diagnostic evidence
Without concrete responsible behaviours such as chores, homework, or community rules, reasoning stays vague.
What to revise after checking
Use one child behaviour to compare how parents and schools each shape it.
- Whether responsible behaviour is concrete
- Whether family and school roles are separated
- Whether social result is explained
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Family topic
IELTS Task 2 family topic 常把 parents、children、elderly 写成泛泛关系。先诊断角色、责任和变化。
Children topic
IELTS Task 2 children topic 常把 children 写得太大。先诊断年龄段、责任主体和行为变化。年龄段决定原因和例子。
Parents children education
父母和儿童教育题要诊断 family role、school role、discipline 和 learning support。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Private schools funding
私立学校政府资助题要诊断 fairness、public money、education access 和 social inequality。
Professional athletes salaries
职业运动员高薪题要诊断 market value、social fairness 和 comparison standard。带着自己的原文逐项检查，再用一次有目标的重写验证判断。
Public art funding
公共艺术经费题要诊断公共收益、预算取舍和文化价值，不要只说 art is important。只说艺术重要，却没有说明为什么 taxpayer 应该支付。
Start practising
Check whether family-education roles are clear.
Submit an outline and see whether parent and school roles are mixed.
References