What to confirm before writing
First decide whether the prompt asks about personal data, surveillance, social media sharing, or business use.
Task 2 question guide
Online-privacy prompts need convenience, data, and regulation separated.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Common risk
Only writing privacy is important lacks responsibility boundaries among companies, governments, and users.
Diagnostic evidence
Without data type, misuse risk, or consent, privacy reasoning stays vague.
What to revise after checking
Write one privacy chain: data collected -> benefit -> misuse risk -> protection rule.
- Whether data type is clear
- Whether risk is specific
- Whether regulatory responsibility is separated
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Technology topic
IELTS Task 2 technology topic 容易写成泛泛的 modern life。先诊断立场、对象和例子是否贴题。用自己的原文逐项检查，并把结论变成一次具体重写。
Media topic
IELTS Task 2 media topic 容易泛写 influence。先诊断信息来源、受众和行为改变。这个观点太大，无法说明是改变消费、观点、学习还是投票。
Privacy example vague
Online privacy example vague 示例诊断例子没有数据类型、风险路径和责任主体的问题。如果例子换到任何科技题都能用，它通常太泛，不能证明隐私观点。
Online shopping local shops
网购和本地商店题要诊断 consumer convenience、small business 和 community impact。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Overseas food local food
进口食物和本地食物题要诊断价格、环境、文化和供应稳定性之间的比较标准。把比较写成：标准 -> A 方证据 -> B 方限制 -> 立场。带着原文完成检查，再用重写验证是否真的改善。
Parents children education
父母和儿童教育题要诊断 family role、school role、discipline 和 learning support。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Start practising
Check whether the online-privacy prompt is overgeneralised.
Submit an outline and see whether data, risk, and regulation are each clear.
References