What to confirm before writing
Write problem or cause, affected group, actor, and expected result first.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then revision; repair one step before writing the next essay.
A solution without actor and mechanism becomes a slogan rather than a scorable response path.
If the problem paragraph explains one cause but the solution solves another issue, Task Response loses focus.
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Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Write problem or cause, affected group, actor, and expected result first.
Use a four-cell table to map each solution back to one concrete problem.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
A solution without actor and mechanism becomes a slogan rather than a scorable response path.
If the problem paragraph explains one cause but the solution solves another issue, Task Response loses focus. Use a four-cell table to map each solution back to one concrete problem.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit a problem-solution outline and get a correspondence diagnosis first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.