Task 1 process

For a process diagram, read stages before translating arrows.

Many process reports mechanically write first, then, after that, but have no overview. The reader cannot see whether the process is linear, cyclical, or split into stages.

Sequence words cannot replace overall structure.

Find the start and end

The overview should at least show where the process starts and ends.

Group by stages

If there are preparation, processing, transport, and sale stages, the body should follow those groups.

Real IELTS essay diagnosis

First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…

Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6

Main blocker

Body paragraph role is unclear

6–7conservative band range

268 words

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How to think about the overview

Before details, state whether the process is cyclical, how many major stages it has, and whether it branches.

What to revise after checking

Write only the overview and two grouping sentences first, not every step. Check whether the groups cover the whole diagram.

Whether the start and end are clear
Whether stages are grouped
Whether cycles or branches are missed

FAQ

What problem does Process diagram solve?

Many process reports mechanically write first, then, after that, but have no overview. The reader cannot see whether the process is linear, cyclical, or split into stages.

What evidence should I check first for Process diagram?

The overview should at least show where the process starts and ends.

What should I redo after reading Process diagram?

If there are preparation, processing, transport, and sale stages, the body should follow those groups. Write only the overview and two grouping sentences first, not every step. Check whether the groups cover the whole diagram.

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