What to confirm before writing
Identify whether each line shows a steady rise, sharp fall, fluctuation, peak, or plateau.
Task 1 vocabulary page
Line graph vocabulary must serve trend, time, and scale.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then revision; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Common risk
Only memorising alternatives to increase, rise, and grow can blur speed and scale of change.
Diagnostic evidence
If a sentence has no time period and scale, the trend word usually has not performed comparison.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
Write three sentences for one data group: trend, scale, and comparison with another line.
- Whether trend vocabulary is accurate
- Whether scale is quantified
- Whether comparison target is clear
FAQ
What problem does Line graph vocabulary solve?
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
What evidence should I check first for Line graph vocabulary?
Only memorising alternatives to increase, rise, and grow can blur speed and scale of change.
What should I redo after reading Line graph vocabulary?
If a sentence has no time period and scale, the trend word usually has not performed comparison. Write three sentences for one data group: trend, scale, and comparison with another line.
Is Line graph vocabulary an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，而不是只改语法或替换高级词。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Line graph
IELTS Task 1 line graph 折线图写作要优先识别总体上升或下降、波动、峰值、交叉点和最终差距，而不是逐年罗列数字。学习把主要趋势放进 overview，再按阶段或可比较对象组织两段细节，用关键数据证明关系。提交报告后，检查趋势选择、段落分组、比较句和数据准确性，确定下一版最该重写的部分。
Task 1 trend vocabulary
IELTS Task 1 trend vocabulary 应准确表达上升、下降、波动、峰值与平台期，并交代时间段、幅度和比较对象。先识别数据的 direction、speed、peak 和 final position，再写趋势句、比较句与 overview；对照图表检查用词是否支持真实数据关系，并重写最模糊的一句。
Bar chart vocabulary
IELTS Task 1 bar chart vocabulary 要先表达排名、差距、相似组和异常值，避免把柱图写成数字清单。
Map task
IELTS Task 1 map 地图题不应按方位逐个罗列建筑。先识别新增、拆除、搬迁、扩建和功能替换，再把变化按区域、时间或用途分组，概括整体规划方向。结合 overview、位置表达和比较句的常见问题，检查自己的报告是否遗漏主变化，并决定下一版先重写总览句、段落分组还是关键位置关系，再验证信息层级。
Map vocabulary
IELTS Task 1 map vocabulary 要先描述方位、替换、扩建、拆除和功能变化。
Task 1 multiple charts
IELTS Task 1 multiple charts 要先诊断两个图之间的关系、共同趋势和可比较数据。
Start diagnosis
Check one line-graph description first.
Submit your Task 1 report and see whether trend vocabulary really supports comparison.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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