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Task 1 comparison

Task 1 is not writing every number; it is comparing related data.

Many reports describe data from left to right and skip the comparison. The reader needs to see at a glance what is highest, what changes most, and which items belong together.

Comparison is part of Task 1 main-feature control.

Related items should sit together

Do not mechanically follow chart order; group by trend, size, or category first.

Comparison supports the overview

The main feature in the overview needs comparison in the body to prove it.

Why separate description weakens the report

If each figure is described separately, the report becomes a list. Task 1 needs the reader to see data relationships.

What to revise after checking

Choose two data groups that should be compared and write only four sentences: what is higher, by how much, how it changes, and why it supports the overview.

  • Whether the report only lists numbers
  • Whether there is size or change comparison
  • Whether comparison supports the overview
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

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半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Task 1 overview
很多 Task 1 卡分点在 overview:缺失、过泛或主特征抓错。了解 overview 为什么压分,以及下一步该专门练哪个动作。带着原文完成检查,再用重写验证是否真的改善。
Task 1 data selection
IELTS Academic Task 1 数据选择决定报告是否真正回应图表。学习如何从折线图、柱状图、表格或饼图中识别主趋势、极值、交叉点和关键分组,先写有信息量的 overview,再用有限数据支持比较。结合常见漏选与逐点复述案例,检查自己的报告最该重写总览句、数据句还是段落分组,并验证是否改善。
Task 1 checker
IELTS Task 1 report checker 应先看 overview 是否成立、主特征是否选对、数据是否准确,数字只挑有用的写。
Writing timing
IELTS Writing 只有 60 分钟。Task 1 和 Task 2 都要完成,时间失控会导致 underlength、展开偏薄和检查时间被挤掉。
Line graph
IELTS Task 1 line graph 折线图写作要优先识别总体上升或下降、波动、峰值、交叉点和最终差距,逐年数字只挑关键的写。学习把主要趋势放进 overview,再按阶段或可比较对象组织两段细节,用关键数据证明关系。提交报告后,检查趋势选择、段落分组、比较句和数据准确性,确定下一版最该重写的部分。
Line graph vocabulary
IELTS Task 1 line graph vocabulary 要先表达上升、下降、峰值、波动和幅度,而不是随机替换同义词。同一组数据写三句:趋势、幅度、与另一条线比较。
Start practising

Check the comparison relationships in Task 1 first.

Submit one Task 1 report and find the main issue in overview, data selection, or comparison.