Why separate description weakens the report
If each figure is described separately, the report becomes a list. Task 1 needs the reader to see data relationships.
Many reports describe data from left to right and skip the comparison. The reader needs to see at a glance what is highest, what changes most, and which items belong together.
Comparison is part of Task 1 main-feature control.
Do not mechanically follow chart order; group by trend, size, or category first.
The main feature in the overview needs comparison in the body to prove it.
If each figure is described separately, the report becomes a list. Task 1 needs the reader to see data relationships.
Choose two data groups that should be compared and write only four sentences: what is higher, by how much, how it changes, and why it supports the overview.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit one Task 1 report and find the main issue in overview, data selection, or comparison.