Task 1 bar chart

For a bar chart, group the bars before reporting figures.

A common bar-chart issue is describing each bar from left to right without comparing size, category gaps, or time changes.

The more bars there are, the more selective the report should be.

Group by category or size

Highest, lowest, and similar groups often organize the body better than chart order.

The overview should capture gaps

The reader should quickly see which category is largest, smallest, and whether the gap is significant.

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Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6

Main blocker

Body paragraph role is unclear

6–7conservative band range

268 words

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When to write exact figures

Use exact figures only when they prove highest, lowest, change, or gap. Do not give every figure equal space.

What to revise after checking

Label each bar first: highest, lowest, similar, or unusual. Then decide the body groups.

Whether the report follows chart order mechanically
Whether size gaps are compared
Whether main features are selected

FAQ

What problem does Bar chart solve?

A common bar-chart issue is describing each bar from left to right without comparing size, category gaps, or time changes.

What evidence should I check first for Bar chart?

Highest, lowest, and similar groups often organize the body better than chart order.

What should I redo after reading Bar chart?

The reader should quickly see which category is largest, smallest, and whether the gap is significant. Label each bar first: highest, lowest, similar, or unusual. Then decide the body groups.

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