Check whether sentences move forward
A strong body paragraph moves from claim to reason, then to example and consequence. Each step should answer the reader’s next question.
Coherence and Cohesion
Coherence is not adding more connectors; it is helping the reader follow your thinking.
Many essays add however, therefore, and moreover, yet the paragraph still breaks. The real check is how each sentence relates to the previous and next one.
Repair relationships before connectors.
Paragraph jobs must be clear
Each paragraph should complete one clear job, not change position, give examples, and conclude at once.
Connectors cannot save broken logic
If adjacent sentences have no real relationship, a connector only exposes the problem.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
If coherence breaks, revise one body paragraph and label each sentence: claim, explanation, example, result.
- What question this sentence answers from the previous one
- Whether the next sentence moves the idea forward
- Whether references are clear
FAQ
What problem does Coherence solve?
Many essays add however, therefore, and moreover, yet the paragraph still breaks. The real check is how each sentence relates to the previous and next one.
What evidence should I check first for Coherence?
Each paragraph should complete one clear job, not change position, give examples, and conclude at once.
What should I redo after reading Coherence?
If adjacent sentences have no real relationship, a connector only exposes the problem. If coherence breaks, revise one body paragraph and label each sentence: claim, explanation, example, result.
Is Coherence an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing criteria
了解 IELTS Writing criteria 时，不要只背 TR/TA、CC、LR、GRA。更有用的是把每项标准转成可诊断的证据和下一次重写步骤。
CC 6 vs 7
IELTS Coherence 从 Band 6 到 7 的差距，常常在段落推进、指代清楚和观点关系，而不是多背几个 linking words。
Linking mistakes
IELTS 写作的连贯来自信息按逻辑推进。机械使用 cohesive devices 反而会暴露段落关系不清。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。
Start diagnosis
Check the idea relationships inside one paragraph.
Submit one essay and find the break that most affects coherence.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References